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Model: Marielle Bakker (my twin ;))

Please let me know what you think of it! :)

Constructive C&C are welcome!
 
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Avatar MsMichelleLynn

 04/13/09 @408

Very nice! I love the lighting and background. Seems surreal. I might have cropped out some of the black. Good work!
 
Avatar L-aura

 04/13/09 @431

I like it, it has a great feel to it ;)
 
Piligrim

 04/13/09 @534

Very nice shot!
 
Avatar Toliano

 04/13/09 @631

Beautiful twin Marielle Bakker:)
 
Avatar ersen-t

 04/13/09 @645

nice work.
the lighting is great.
nice tones.
only critic, the building in the background is distracting.
 
Avatar Daykan

 04/13/09 @839

It´s really nice!! Great light and touch of color. Pretty model too!
 
Avatar ThruMyEyez

 04/14/09 @977

A very nice portrait. I'd crop a small amount from the right side.
 
Avatar Madanapale

 04/14/09 @013

Beautiful!.....love the mood!
Excellent composition....top marks!
Good work Jacobine!
Carlos
 
Avatar ARZILLIER66

 04/14/09 @063

Beautiful portrait!
I like the mood (thumbup)
agree Carlos comment
 
Avatar Nale

 04/15/09 @472

Wow Jacobine,i'm speechless.This goes to my favourite artworks
 
Avatar Tommyguns

 04/16/09 @230

Beautiful lighting! Composition is fabulous! No crits here! +10

Tommyguns
 
Avatar Roadrunner

 04/17/09 @248

Beautiful shot (and model).
 
Avatar cgaddict

 04/17/09 @514

Great shot and beautiful model. Lightning is very well done as well. Top marks!
 
Avatar cupcake

 04/17/09 @638

Excellent~~
 
Avatar Jacobine

 04/17/09 @800

Thanks all! :)
 
Avatar moserArtist

 04/18/09 @279

Beautiful work Jacobine! :)
 
Avatar FakeIllusion

 04/18/09 @707

I think the clouds do the trick, nice work
 
Avatar zaclab

 04/19/09 @335

Nice model and lighting, framing and clouds, but I really don't like building in the background.
 
Avatar rifty

 04/19/09 @465

great mood, I like the desaturation.. not sure about that much black, but otherwise nice composition.. and I agree with zaclab.. blue sky or some nature in the backgraound would be much better.
 
Avatar ceogar

 04/19/09 @723

I like the expression but like many here it feels like the picture is concentrated on the black parts of the picture. Would have wanted a bit more detailt on her face aswell perhaps.
 
Avatar ogu

 04/19/09 @900

I would remove some of the black parts but then it's hard to keep the comp.
Nice work
 
Avatar Jacobine

 04/20/09 @305

Thanks for the feedback on the photo people! :)
I agree the black is heavy, but because it's "nothing" it doesn't attract too much attention (to me at least ;))
I'll play around with the crop though and see what difference it can make!
 
DoubleConvex

 04/20/09 @550

Very emotive, and beautifully rendered! :) (thumbup)
 
Avatar soheil

 05/01/09 @356

Very impressive . ( the model[s] is beautiful too...) ;) +10
 
Avatar JeffMD

 05/06/09 @260

pretty in all aspect of it.
 
Avatar anastasia

 05/07/09 @053

I love the composition... Very artistic the way of the light goes in and finish in black! I very much like the colored face in addition with the grey tones...
The look of your sister is very beautiful also!
Impressive work, top marked!
(i agree about a bit cropping on the right side with the black, but minor issue...)
 
Avatar killadore

 05/12/09 @982

I love the crop. Very unusual and this is one of the rare times where it works. I also enjoy the look on the woman's face, very beautiful and it certainly draws you in. The selective desaturation feels slightly out of place here though. Mainly because there's such a strong contrast between the black/white parts and the colored parts and because the background seems to be so sharp. Something like a split-tone might've been a better choice for this, in my opinion.
Great stuff, Jacobine!
 
Avatar monjo

 05/26/09 @071

Love it! Sorry I'm so late.
 
Dansa

 06/05/09 @795

Nice pic :)
 
Avatar Vasco

 06/15/09 @705

I missed this one! Sorry!!!
Very nice work! Really nice!
 
Avatar Giskar

 06/19/09 @984

Wow
 
Avatar Almost-Human

 08/17/09 @757

really nice portrait, but from a composition point of view you have the nose cutting accross the far eye cutting it in 2.. big no no..

Love the light and she is a very attrative model and so handy as she is your twin ;)
 
apeirokalia

 08/24/09 @451

Love the light and composition :)
 
Avatar marcotronic

 11/02/09 @525

wonderful light and really beautiful model.
Marco
 
waheednasir

 03/12/10 @200

thats well done. smart arrangement/composition.
:).
 
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GFXuser name:
   Jacobine
Full Name:
  Jacobine
Gender:
  Female
Birthdate:
  09/21/1988 (21)
Country:
  Netherlands
Member since:
  03/13/2008

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